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Commas are used to separate list items.
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1. When
there are more than two items in a list, they should be separated using commas. The last item is usually preceded with
"and", "or" or "but". (These are
called "conjunctions".) There
is normally no need to put a comma before the conjunction.
Examples:
The old vicar, the new vicar, the
pub landlord, the mayor and the chairman
were at the
meeting.
(no comma before "and")
I have not seen any foxes, badgers or deer in these woods this
year.
(no
comma before "or")
2. However, on
occasion, it is appropriate to place a comma before the conjunction in
order to
avoid any ambiguity.
Examples:
The
news will be shown after Dangermouse, and Rug Rats.
(Without the comma,
readers could think that "Dangermouse and Rug Rats"
is one
programme.)
The emblem is an
amalgamation of the British and Irish flags, the Stars
and Stripes, and
the Hammer and Sickle.
(The word
"and" appears lots of times in this example. The comma
before
the "and" makes it easier for the reader.)
I need to see DC
Jones, PC Pinner, and PC Hoyles in my office immediately.
(no ambiguity -
comma not required)
She went to
the shops for eggs, milk, and butter.
(Mini Test)
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BEWARE
CONFUSION WITH AN EXTRA COMMA
As covered in Section 4 below, commas can also be
used to introduce additional information (called parenthesis). For example:
My friend, Simon, lives near the concrete cows in Milton Keynes.
(In this example, commas are being used
to add information
about "my
friend".)
Therefore, if a comma is used unnecessarily before a conjunction in a
list, it could look like parenthesis and cause confusion. For
example:
I left the pub with my friend, Simon, and Terry.
(In this sentence, I left the pub with
two people: Simon and Terry.)
I
left the pub with my friend, Simon and Terry.
(In this sentence, I left the pub with
three people: my unnamed
friend, Simon and Terry.)
This is why you should avoid using a comma before the conjunction
in a list.
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3. Often in creative writing, there is a need to use several
adjectives (describing words - see lesson "Adjectives").
A list of adjectives is governed by rules that are slightly
different (more relaxed):
For
TWO adjectives
vast, inhospitable moor
(with a comma)
vast and inhospitable moor
(with "and")
vast inhospitable moor
(with nothing)
For THREE or more adjectives
vast, inhospitable, windy moor
(commas between)
vast, inhospitable and windy moor
(comma(s) between and then
"and")
vast inhospitable windy moor
(nothing between)
vast inhospitable and windy moor
(nothing and then
"and")
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CONFUSED?
There is no need to worry. In short, you cannot go wrong with
2 adjectives and using 3 is rare. (Lining up adjectives in a row is
called "enumeration of adjectives".)
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A
comma is used after an introduction to a
sentence.
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1. It is common for a sentence to start with an introduction. An
introduction can be anything from just one word to a long clause. In general,
an introduction is used to state a time, a place, a condition, a
frequency or a fact before the main part of the sentence.
(Introductions vary hugely.)
Examples:
In the centre of London, the number of people who fell victim to
pickpockets
rose by 30 per cent in a month.
(sets a
place)
As soon as the cake is golden-brown, take it out of the
oven.
(sets a
time)
Yesterday, the manager visited the stables.
(sets a
time)
On Tuesday 4th
July a band played carols in the park for 8
hours. 
("On
Tuesday 4th July" sets a time. It is an introduction and
should be
followed by a comma.)
Having spoken to John, I can confirm that
the meeting is definitely off.
(states
a fact)
As
you are well aware, the latest figures do not look promising.
(states
a fact)
After the secretary had read the minutes of the meeting, the chairman
asked for the financial report.
(Mini Test)
A band played in the park for 8 hours on Tuesday 4th
July.
(Mini Test)
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A
comma is used after an
introduction that links the sentence to the previous one.
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1.
It is common for a sentence to start with an introduction that acts like a
bridge between the last sentence and the new sentence. The
introduction makes the transition between the two sentences
smoother. (It is known as a "transitional phrase".)
It always appears at the start of a sentence and is followed by a
comma. (This subject is closely related to Section 2
above.)
Examples:
Bruce Leonard
spent 4 years in Japan studying Kung Fu and 3 years at the
London School
of Martial Arts as the senior instructor. As a result, his style...
("As a
result" is a transitional phrase. It acts like a bridge between
the previous
sentence and the new one. It is followed by a comma.)
Of course, he never knew…
("Of course," < transitional phrase)
In summary,
7 out of 10…
("In summary," <
transitional phrase)
Therefore, the cost of each
lesson…
("Therefore," < transitional phrase)
Consequently,
his teaching techniques…
("Consequently," <
transitional phrase)
However,
Bruce was unaware…
("However," <
transitional phrase)
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Commas
can be used for parenthesis.
(also covered in lesson "Parenthesis")
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PARENTHESIS?
A parenthesis
is additional information in a sentence. If a parenthesis is
removed, the sentence still makes sense.
The defendant, Mr Michael
Evans, sat in silence. 
("Mr
Michael Evans" is additional information. This is
a
parenthesis.)
The
last owner of the Red Lion,
who is my sister's neighbour,
won over 4 million on The
National Lottery. 
("who is my sister's
neighbour" is additional information. This is
a
parenthesis.)
Comments such as "however", "therefore", "as a result", "as far as I am
concerned", etc. fall into the category of parenthesis too.
John Winfield, on the other
hand, is an exprienced jockey.
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1. Commas can be used to separate a parenthesis
from the rest of the sentence. It is also possible to use
dashes or brackets. When used in this way, commas, dashes and
brackets are called "parentheses". (See lesson "Parenthesis"
for more information.)
Examples:
The
second boat in the race, the 6-berth Kontarka, was crewed by school
children from Pembrokeshire.
Last year's GB faggot-eating champion who works with my brother came
in here and ate two loaves of bread in one sitting.
(Mini Test)
2. Although
the use of commas for parentheses makes for a normal-looking
sentence, they can become confused with other commas in the sentence.
Example:
Last night, Josie, an escaped wallaby
from London Zoo, attacked two young
sisters, Rebecca and Josie, which
is pure coincidence, Evans, in a bid to steal
their crisps.
(Although grammatically correct, the writer could have used a mixture
of
parentheses in order to make the sentence
clearer.)
Last night, Josie (an escaped wallaby
from London Zoo) attacked two young
sisters - Rebecca and Josie
(which is pure coincidence) Evans - in a bid to steal
their crisps.
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A
comma can be used before words like "and",
"or" and "but" (also covered in lesson "Conjunctions").
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1. Words like "and", "or" and
"but" are known as "conjunctions". (There are
other conjunctions, but these 3 are by far the most common. For more
information, see the lesson "Conjunctions".) As
well as being used in a list, a conjunction can be used to merge two sentences
into one. This is very common. When a conjunction is used in this
way, it should have a comma before it. (It is called a "co-ordinate
conjunction" in this role.)
Examples:
He is a great
swimmer, but he prefers to play golf.
("He is a great swimmer." + "He
prefers to play golf.")
(This is two sentences merged into one with
"but" - comma required.)
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I may consider your
plan, or I may disregard it.
("I may
consider your plan" + "I may disregard it." - comma required)
The female applicant must be able to
tell jokes and sing, and she must be
able to dance.
("The female applicant must be able to
tell jokes and sing." + "She must be
able to dance." - comma
required)
The female applicant must be able to
tell jokes, sing, and dance.
(normal conjunction - no comma required)
PLC provided the material, and we built the road.
(Mini Test)
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A
comma is used after an introductory expression such as "yes",
"indeed" and "absolutely".
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A
comma can be used before a quotation.
(also covered in lesson "Quotation Marks")
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Commas are used with large numbers to separate the thousands
(i.e. every 3 decimal places).
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Commas
are used to show the vocative case.
(also covered in lesson "Vocative Case")
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A
comma can be used to group a long subject (explained below).
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1.
As in the last example above, the subject of a sentence can
consist of more than one person or thing. (This is known as a
"compound subject".) Sometimes, the subject is made up of
so many elements that writers like to end the list with a comma to group them
together.
Example:
A clean driving licence, the ability to operate under pressure and 5
years'
experience in marketing, are the only criteria stipulated by
the selection panel. 
("A
clean driving licence, the ability to operate under pressure and 5
years'
experience in marketing" is the compound subject of this
sentence. The verb is
"are" - from the verb "to
be".)
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FROWNED
UPON?
Be aware that ending a long compound subject with a comma is not
popular with some grammarians. It is not wrong, but is best
avoided.
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